The FanFiction Critic, episode 50, “Harry and a Mutant”
The fanfiction in today’s episode belongs entirely to the author. It can be read in its entirety here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1936786/1/bHarry_b_and_ba_b_bmutant_b. Suggest bad fanfiction: thefanfictioncritic@gmail.com
Great review! I loved your “demonstrations” about proper grammar. ^_^
I think that the author was trying to convey that Raven’s mutant power is akin to Mystique;s.However, she is only able to transform her outfit. However, the author’s poor word choice, as well as no reaction from Harry, makes this intention muddled.
Also, correct grammar rules!
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sorry bout shit grammer
It’s great to see another awesome review in so long.